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re: Help, is this offputting...Have to create a graduation ad to go in son's senior yearbook.

Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:21 pm to
Posted by Boondock Saint
The Boondocks
Member since Oct 2005
4818 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:21 pm to
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Help, is this offputting


This post was edited on 8/27/25 at 4:22 pm
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
133052 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:24 pm to
quote:

Just get ChatGPT to write it and move on.



What a lame take
Posted by cajungoalie
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2008
684 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:29 pm to
Put that in a card specifivally to him...not the yearbook.


"Congrats son, Mom and Dad"
Posted by SallysHuman
Lady Palmetto Bug
Member since Jan 2025
13393 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:31 pm to
I asked chatGPT to fix it up for you

quote:

I know you can spot the hidden challenges and savor life’s simple joys.

You’ve learned strength in body and spirit, stood as a teammate, led as a captain, and risen as a champion all your own.

You’ve steadied the mast in stormy seas, lifted your voice in music and laughter, calmed wild moments and cared for the smallest lives.

You’ve worked hard when the road was tough, aimed high, and faced each trail with courage.

You’ve stared down chaos with wit and resolve, built fires of passion and put them to rest with wisdom.

All these moments, all these phases of you, are stepping stones on the journey ahead.

Go forward with pride, carry every lesson, and know that the horizon is wide and waiting.

Fair winds and following seas, my son.
Posted by Tangineck
Mandeville
Member since Nov 2017
2719 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:42 pm to
He'll probably be embarrassed by what you wrote now and cherish it when he's 50 and comes across it again. That being said, less can be more in situations like these, but every relationship is different. Just write from the heart and it'll be fine. My parents submitted nothing for my yearbook. We are an emotionally distant and hard to know family though.
Posted by KirbySmartass
Member since Jul 2020
2951 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:44 pm to
quote:

“frick Bitches. Get Money.”


Pretty great advice overall for a young man starting life’s journey.
Posted by madamsquirrel
The big somewhere out there
Member since Jul 2009
54715 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:45 pm to
That makes it much more easy to read.
Posted by SallysHuman
Lady Palmetto Bug
Member since Jan 2025
13393 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:49 pm to
quote:

That makes it much more easy to read.


I wish I could take credit.
Posted by RazorBroncs
Possesses the largest
Member since Sep 2013
15748 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:51 pm to

Might consider paring it down a little, but other than that I liked OPs (with some punctuation and paragraphs) and I liked Sallys version too.

My parents did the "Congratulations, love Mom and Dad" message on mine and it was a little disappointing. Last time I dug up a yearbook a few years ago in my mid-30s, it was still as disappointing.

I say go for it. Your son will only have one high school senior yearbook, live a little
Posted by ironwood
Member since Aug 2021
331 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 4:51 pm to
Thank you everybody
Good honest feedback

I don't know how to edit the original post but I appreciated the feedback
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
133052 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 5:20 pm to
Son, I know you've,
Got what it takes,
To tell the berries from the snakes.
Work in a team, or on your own,
My son, oh how much you have grown,

You hold the mast, and know no fear,
Your song so strong and ringing clear,
Your tune could soothe the savage beast,
Yet you find time to help the least,

You know the grind, and play the game,
The prize is yours if you take aim,
And when you face that wild trail,
Your stare, defiant, shall not fail,

When chaos and the hell flames spit,
You'll rise above, with pluck and wit,
And all these steps and milestones,
You'll make them all your own, your own,

Live well with love, and each day seize,
My son, fair winds,
And Following seas.



This post was edited on 8/27/25 at 8:39 pm
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
133052 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 5:21 pm to
I reworked your words. See if they say what you are trying to.

Posted by dblwall
Member since Jul 2017
1074 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 5:53 pm to
Maybe give your kid some props, kind of like this?



Posted by BPTiger
Atlanta
Member since Oct 2011
6021 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 7:55 pm to
quote:

Or just go with the tale as old time… “frick Bitches. Get Money.”


It’s get money frick bitches. The order matters.
Posted by Macavity92
Member since Dec 2004
6270 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:10 pm to
Well done. Reminds me of my dad. He had a new poem for every milestone.
Posted by Uncommon Idea
Member since Feb 2025
136 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:11 pm to
Son or Daughter.

We are so proud of the work you've put in to graduate from high school. Always remember that time will continue to move forward and to overcome, you must adapt to the changes time brings forth.

Now get a job because we're not paying for your college.

Love,
Mom and Dad
Posted by HeadSlash
TEAM LIVE BADASS - St. GEORGE
Member since Aug 2006
54693 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:25 pm to
quote:

Graduating high school really isn’t that special


My dad used to say any idiot could do it
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
133052 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:29 pm to
quote:

Isn’t this kinda reserved for sailors?



Are we not all sailors on the tempestuous seas of life?
It's an apt metaphor
Posted by Earnest_P
Member since Aug 2021
5042 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:31 pm to
Write him a private letter. Don't put all that stuff in his yearbook.
Posted by Lowdermilk
Lowdermilk Beach
Member since Aug 2024
910 posts
Posted on 8/27/25 at 8:35 pm to


Just tell him to wear sunscreen!
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