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re: My son “released” a song from the basement-looking for feedback

Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:33 am to
Posted by Boo Krewe
Member since Apr 2015
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Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:33 am to
Songs not bad I like it
Posted by txbd
Valhalla
Member since Jan 2014
2339 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:34 am to
Can he rap?
Posted by JumpingTheShark
America
Member since Nov 2012
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Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:36 am to
I will say his style of singing is in right now, I don’t get it, but it’s very popular. Where it kind of sounds like someone intentionally pronouncing their r’s like a 3 year old. Really not trying to knock him, I have noticed it on the radio a lot. Not sure if anyone else has noticed this too. It’s not bad, just not my style. I think the song ain’t bad, especially for an amateur.

Edit: Reminds me of this:

Noah Kahan - False Confidence
This post was edited on 7/19/19 at 8:40 am
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135028 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:42 am to
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Yeah, guys aren’t supposed to have any emotions about their friendships with other guys. Emotions are gay!



I’m being serious...it sounds like a love song from the style and lyrics. NTTAWWT.

It’s heartfelt
Posted by statman34
Member since Feb 2011
3851 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:44 am to
His singing and piano are pretty good. That beat that comes in after the song starts is off tempo bad. It doesn't match the piano tempo at all. If he eliminated that it would be much better. All around nice job though. Not my cup of tea but that type of music is in with the younger crowd.
Posted by Hudson00
Member since Feb 2017
187 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:48 am to
It sounds like 7 Years without any of the good parts.
Posted by Janky
Team Primo
Member since Jun 2011
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Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:49 am to
Congrats. Now you have this to look forward to.



Posted by The Pirate King
Pangu
Member since May 2014
69664 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 8:59 am to
My first feedback would be to not take feedback from the OT

If you’re serious about him going somewhere with music, get him some singing lessons, have him write a few more songs and drop a demo on social media. Stuff spreads like wildfire these days.
Posted by Eric Nies Grind Time
Member since Sep 2012
25522 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:04 am to
It's not horrible...I am sure with a producer it could be improved a lot.

Seemed like he was trying to pass himself off as British? Parchment? Mate?
Posted by Broke
AKA Buttercup
Member since Sep 2006
65493 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:08 am to
He has potential. Harmonize the vocals, put a happier part in. And he uses strange words like "parchment" which isn't used in normal conversation.

This is what he needs to get to. This is my band:

Digging

Listen to this singer. He's monotone feeling but he makes subtle changes to make it work. This is my 2nd band:

Chainsaw Dreams
This post was edited on 7/19/19 at 9:13 am
Posted by JohnDoe00
Houston, TX
Member since Feb 2019
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Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:20 am to
It pains me...
Posted by TheSlizzardKing
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Member since Oct 2010
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Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:41 am to
Kudos to him for being able to actually play and instrument and put himself out there. He’ll get better with age. I wouldn’t take the criticism of anyone on a sports message board too seriously. Most of them probably only play the skin flute.
Posted by KLSU
Baton Rouge
Member since Sep 2003
11198 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:48 am to
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When layering vocals, he needs to change the pitch of one part. Sing one part higher than the other.


I agree 100% with this! Other than that it was pretty good for a young singer and I have heard way worse from "artist" who have made it..
This post was edited on 7/19/19 at 9:49 am
Posted by Saint Alfonzo
Member since Jan 2019
30948 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:52 am to
quote:

He has potential. Harmonize the vocals, put a happier part in. And he uses strange words like "parchment" which isn't used in normal conversation. This is what he needs to get to. This is my band: Digging Listen to this singer. He's monotone feeling but he makes subtle changes to make it work. This is my 2nd band: Chainsaw Dreams


I liked the kid's song better than both of those. And lol to "strange words like parchment." Are lyrics supposed to be conversational?
Posted by The Boat
Member since Oct 2008
178325 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:53 am to
Song is slow and boring.

Your first single has to be fast paced to catch the bitch's attention.
Posted by 777Tiger
Member since Mar 2011
93541 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 9:58 am to
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Song is slow and boring.


yeah, it's not very good, but it's a start

quote:

Your first single has to be fast paced to catch the bitch's attention.


nah, if you're in a band. or play a musical instrument, that's good enough to make the draws drop
Posted by jmon
Loisiana
Member since Oct 2010
10340 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 10:05 am to
My feedback is:

DON'T EVER look to the OT for anything positive, especially regarding children, spouse, partner, friendship, nothing! You'll wind up thinking your kids are meth-heads, spouse is a cheating whore, your girlfriend likes DP and your friends are all USA hating race baiting millenials!
Posted by 777Tiger
Member since Mar 2011
93541 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 10:16 am to
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your kids are meth-heads,


that's how Glenn Frye died

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spouse is a cheating whore, your girlfriend likes DP


they have nudes on redditt

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friends are all USA hating race baiting millennials!


seen bigger USA hating race baiting millennials in the quad
Posted by AU1960
ALABAMA
Member since Oct 2008
3632 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 10:19 am to
He should audition for America Don't have talent.
Enough of this whiney arse young shite.
Posted by WWII Collector
Member since Oct 2018
9286 posts
Posted on 7/19/19 at 10:51 am to
I thought that is was pretty good...



But what do I know... I still listen to Ruth Etting from 1931.
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