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re: Great idea for a country song

Posted on 10/3/19 at 9:02 pm to
Posted by Hangit
The Green Swamp
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Posted on 10/3/19 at 9:02 pm to
Posted by TigerFox
Member since Jun 2013
318 posts
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:54 pm to
I used to be left with three little words now all I get is three little dots. It once signaled there was more to come but now I see it’s the ending for this bum.

I used to be left with three little words now all I get is three little dots Who once delivered messages that bloom now only disappear with sadness and gloom.

I used to be left with three little words now all I get is three little dots. Once they had been fun since they told me we were not done but tonight they faded for hours I waited.


The dots you see were not meant for me They allowed me to flee this catastrophe The message was clear it was not me dear. For I’ll never fear because there’s always beer.
Posted by biglego
San Francisco
Member since Nov 2007
85526 posts
Posted on 10/3/19 at 11:48 pm to
You’re a talented and prolific message board writer with wit. I can usually recognize your posts without even looking. If I’m making things weird, then good. If anyone tells us to get a room, well I’m down with that too.
Posted by Big Papa Satan
Hell
Member since Jun 2019
263 posts
Posted on 10/4/19 at 2:00 am to
You have a great voice, oweo.

LINK
Posted by BrohanDavey
The Land Down Under
Member since Oct 2018
790 posts
Posted on 10/4/19 at 4:01 am to
quote:

Pour me, pour me another drink
'Cause I don't wanna feel a thing
No more, hell no
I just want to sip 'til the pain wears off


This is the most played song at Eli in Monroe. Not kidding
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
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Posted on 10/4/19 at 7:57 pm to
I appreciate it man. I really do. Maybe we can get a beer some time
Posted by RazorBroncs
Possesses the largest
Member since Sep 2013
16466 posts
Posted on 10/4/19 at 8:10 pm to
quote:

I probably have over 100 songs written. I just need a guitarist to throw some chords in and some studio time.


IN

I was the lead guitarist in a band for about 15 years, I can write musical arrangements 1000x better than lyrics
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
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Posted on 10/5/19 at 9:45 am to
Email me


<<<<<<<<@gmail.com
Posted by Frezdoll
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Posted on 10/5/19 at 11:45 pm to
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This post was edited on 10/25/19 at 9:40 pm
Posted by MrFreakinMiyagi
Reseda
Member since Feb 2007
20152 posts
Posted on 10/6/19 at 12:51 am to
This is dreadful

But still better than any other country song ever
Posted by tilco
Spanish Fort, AL
Member since Nov 2013
14619 posts
Posted on 10/6/19 at 6:31 am to
I texted “are you up”
She’s probably been asleep awhile
The dots come and go
I ain’t think booty calls were her style

Now them dots is solid
Is she down or not
She hits back with a selfie
Tires screeching out da parking lot
Posted by alajones
Huntsvegas
Member since Oct 2005
35970 posts
Posted on 10/6/19 at 6:51 am to
Here’s one I was working on a few years ago

Hey girl
You look good in those tight jeans
One could even say they were painted on
Let’s get in my truck
Go down to the creek/lake
We’ll drink some good stuff
Listen to some old Hank/Skynyrd




What do y’all think? CMA worthy?
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135032 posts
Posted on 10/6/19 at 9:36 am to
quote:

Hey girl
You look good in those tight jeans
One could even say they were painted on Let’s get in my truck
Go down to the creek/lake
We’ll drink some good stuff
Listen to some old Hank/Skynyrd






Posted by 777Tiger
Member since Mar 2011
93541 posts
Posted on 10/6/19 at 9:39 am to
quote:

What do y’all think? cringe worthy?
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135032 posts
Posted on 10/7/19 at 8:46 pm to
Finished it
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135032 posts
Posted on 10/7/19 at 9:25 pm to

quote:

It would be better if it was the last text from a passed away wife. you know in the same vein as He stopped loving her today. Country Music Paydirt.



“Unread Forever”

Vs 1: Well she’d always call or text to let him know,
When she got where she was going,
And he’d always tell how he loved her so,
And she’d wear a smile knowing,
That the man she’d loved so long would never leave her,
Without a warm goodbye,
And he’d wait with bated breath
Til she was safe,
And sent her usual reply,

Chorus:
Now he plays her messages over and over,
Just to hear her sweet voice one more time,
As he cries in her pillow,
To smell her perfume,
Though fading to him it’s sublime,
Dead and gone are the things that he once loved to do,
With the girl that he loved come whatever,
On her phone shines a message,
His last “I Love You”
But his words remain unread forever.

Vs 2:
Well she left for work one morning in the rain,
He said “you shouldn’t drive in this.”
But she told him she had meetings to attend,
And then she left him with a kiss,
But the usual reply it never came,
And so he sent his “I love you”,
And when the officer knocked on his door that day,
His loving heart was torn in two,

Chorus:
And he plays her messages over and over,
Just to hear her sweet voice one more time,
As he cries in her pillow,
To smell her perfume,
Though fading to him it’s sublime,
Dead and gone are the things that he once loved to do,
With the girl that he loved come whatever,
On her phone shines a message,
His last “I Love You”
But his words remain unread forever.


So when you leave your loved ones,
Make sure you leave on a good note,
‘Cause the next “I love you” it could be,
The last one that gets wrote,
Yeah things we take for granted can go,
It the blink of an eye,
So make sure that you never regret it,
When you say goodbye.




How’s this? It’s terribly sad but true
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135032 posts
Posted on 10/8/19 at 12:18 am to
Anyone else have any song ideas? I’m in a writing mood
Posted by HempHead
Big Sky Country
Member since Mar 2011
56772 posts
Posted on 10/8/19 at 12:20 am to
quote:

Finished it



As always, my friend, you provide quality lyrics.
Posted by HempHead
Big Sky Country
Member since Mar 2011
56772 posts
Posted on 10/8/19 at 12:22 am to
quote:

Anyone else have any song ideas? I’m in a writing mood



Comedy. Mississippi Muslims.
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
135032 posts
Posted on 10/8/19 at 12:28 am to
quote:

Mississippi Muslims



Nothing really coming to mind. Throw something else at the wall
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