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Great idea for a country song
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:11 am
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:11 am
Just came to me. You know those three dots on the iPhone screen when the person you're texting is composing a message. And sometimes you know they're composing a message but decide not to send it or whatever and you see those dots but they disappear and then that's it.
That would be a great country song. Like a woman leaves her husband or something like that, and he texts her "I love you please come back" or something, and there are those three little dots blinking for a good solid couple of minutes, but then they go away and he never hears from her again.
Chorus:
Those three little dots on an iPhone screen
the only indication as to what caused you to leave
and now you're gone forever and all you've left for me
is three little dots on an iPhone screen
Anybody reading this in Nashville, you can have this idea. It's yours. You're welcome. Run with it.
That would be a great country song. Like a woman leaves her husband or something like that, and he texts her "I love you please come back" or something, and there are those three little dots blinking for a good solid couple of minutes, but then they go away and he never hears from her again.
Chorus:
Those three little dots on an iPhone screen
the only indication as to what caused you to leave
and now you're gone forever and all you've left for me
is three little dots on an iPhone screen
Anybody reading this in Nashville, you can have this idea. It's yours. You're welcome. Run with it.
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Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:12 am to LSUTigersVCURams
Hmmmm...give me a bit and i’ll See what I can come up with
Finished it up
“Ellipses”
Vs 1:
Well I told myself the day you left,
It wouldn’t bother me at all,
But here it is at 2 am, again,
And I’m wishing you would call,
And as I lay here in the darkness,
This screen is shining out so bright,
As three dots on my messages appear,
And then they’re gone like every night,
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
And it seems “i’m Sorry”’s left unread
Vs 2:
Well maybe one more time I’ll tell you how I feel,
Perhaps this time it might go through,
As my words tell you the ways that I was wrong,
And how I can’t get over you,
But chances are you’ll just ignore them one more time,
Because it should be clear you’re done,
But those ellipses tease me that there’s one more chance,
So I’ll wait ‘til the morning sun.
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
And it seems “i’m Sorry”’s left unread
Finished it up
“Ellipses”
Vs 1:
Well I told myself the day you left,
It wouldn’t bother me at all,
But here it is at 2 am, again,
And I’m wishing you would call,
And as I lay here in the darkness,
This screen is shining out so bright,
As three dots on my messages appear,
And then they’re gone like every night,
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
And it seems “i’m Sorry”’s left unread
Vs 2:
Well maybe one more time I’ll tell you how I feel,
Perhaps this time it might go through,
As my words tell you the ways that I was wrong,
And how I can’t get over you,
But chances are you’ll just ignore them one more time,
Because it should be clear you’re done,
But those ellipses tease me that there’s one more chance,
So I’ll wait ‘til the morning sun.
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
And it seems “i’m Sorry”’s left unread
This post was edited on 10/7/19 at 8:46 pm
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:18 am to LSUTigersVCURams
Pour me, pour me another drink
'Cause I don't wanna feel a thing
No more, hell no
I just want to sip 'til the pain wears off
'Cause I don't wanna feel a thing
No more, hell no
I just want to sip 'til the pain wears off
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:18 am to LSUTigersVCURams
Sounds like a Luke Bryan song
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:19 am to fr33manator
quote:
.give me a bit and i’ll See what I can come up with
bastard!!!
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:20 am to Chad504boy
I actually like this song, as cliche as it is
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:20 am to fr33manator
quote:
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
Seems my sorry’s left unread.
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:22 am to CoachChappy
quote:
Sounds like a Luke Bryan song
I'm thinking more like a Chris Stapleton. I bet he could kill that song with a guitar in a smoky barroom with a glass of whiskey.
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:22 am to LSUTigersVCURams
It’ll never catch on. They tell me all the popular people use android.
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:27 am to TDsngumbo
Here’s one I wrote a while back.
“You’re gonna miss me, more than the whiskey”
Vs 1:
You stumble in at 3am,
Like so many nights before,
And I can tell what State you’re in,
By how damn hard you slam the door,
And the smell of cheap perfume,
Can’t hide the liquor on your breath,
So in the morning your hangover,
Will be the only thing that’s left,
Chorus:
And you’re gonna miss me,
More than the whiskey,
You’re gonna reach for me,
Once the bottle, has gone dry,
Yeah It’s gonna hit her,
Stronger than liquor,
And in that sober Sunday morning sun, I’m gone,
‘Cause the whiskey won’t keep company for long,
Vs 2.:
There’s only so much you can take,
Before you finally give up hope,
And you’re trying to hang on,
But you’re running out of rope,
All the same apologies,
For all the nights I’ve paced the floor,
Now you can keep all your “I’m sorry’s”,
‘Cause I don’t need them anymore,
Repeat chorus
Got a feel kind of like this
Mercy-Brett Young
“You’re gonna miss me, more than the whiskey”
Vs 1:
You stumble in at 3am,
Like so many nights before,
And I can tell what State you’re in,
By how damn hard you slam the door,
And the smell of cheap perfume,
Can’t hide the liquor on your breath,
So in the morning your hangover,
Will be the only thing that’s left,
Chorus:
And you’re gonna miss me,
More than the whiskey,
You’re gonna reach for me,
Once the bottle, has gone dry,
Yeah It’s gonna hit her,
Stronger than liquor,
And in that sober Sunday morning sun, I’m gone,
‘Cause the whiskey won’t keep company for long,
Vs 2.:
There’s only so much you can take,
Before you finally give up hope,
And you’re trying to hang on,
But you’re running out of rope,
All the same apologies,
For all the nights I’ve paced the floor,
Now you can keep all your “I’m sorry’s”,
‘Cause I don’t need them anymore,
Repeat chorus
Got a feel kind of like this
Mercy-Brett Young
This post was edited on 10/3/19 at 10:30 am
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:29 am to fr33manator
quote:
Here’s one I wrote a while back.
I actually wrote and recorded "Missing You" about my ex decades ago, wish I would have copyrighted it because I'm almost positive no one done it before, still have the hand written lyrics and the CD
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:30 am to LSUTigersVCURams
I don’t think Hank done it that way...
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:31 am to 777Tiger
quote:
I actually wrote and recorded "Missing You" about my ex decades ago, wish I would have copyrighted it because I'm almost positive no one done it before, still have the hand written lyrics and the CD
You play?
And how would someone else come up with the exact song as you?
Or are you saying just the title?
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:33 am to fr33manator
quote:
You play?
yeah
quote:
And how would someone else come up with the exact song as you?
same song title, I guess the title itself doesn't take a whole lot of imagination, but my lyrics are funny as hell, anyone who's ever had a bad breakup and hears it laughs their arse off
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:36 am to LSUTigersVCURams
quote:
Great idea for a country song
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:38 am to 777Tiger
I guess i’ll Post some of my funny ones here. If someone steals it, oh well, at least it will get played.
Beaches be crazy
Vs 1:
Toes digging into the sand.
Where the waves meet the shore,
Cold beer sitting in my hand,
Every sip makes me feel a little more,
Tipsy,
then it hits me,
Ain’t no time clock near,
On vacation,
No aggravations,
I came to party,
So let’s get it started right here,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Vs 2:
Work each day ‘til the sun goes down,
To keep up with the bills,
But when summertime comes around,
Think I’ve earned a little time to chill,
Relax,
And just kick back,
In the midday sun,
String bikinis,
Look at the scenery,
No hurries no worries,
Let yourself go and have fun,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Vs 3:
Sand castles and salty air,
Makes a man feel at ease,
Spend my days without a care,
Hear the music on the ocean breeze,
Getting hotter,
Two Pina Coladas,
On the radio,
Ain’t no troubles,
I’m seeing double,
T-shirts getting wetter,
It don’t get much better you know,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Beaches be crazy
Vs 1:
Toes digging into the sand.
Where the waves meet the shore,
Cold beer sitting in my hand,
Every sip makes me feel a little more,
Tipsy,
then it hits me,
Ain’t no time clock near,
On vacation,
No aggravations,
I came to party,
So let’s get it started right here,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Vs 2:
Work each day ‘til the sun goes down,
To keep up with the bills,
But when summertime comes around,
Think I’ve earned a little time to chill,
Relax,
And just kick back,
In the midday sun,
String bikinis,
Look at the scenery,
No hurries no worries,
Let yourself go and have fun,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Vs 3:
Sand castles and salty air,
Makes a man feel at ease,
Spend my days without a care,
Hear the music on the ocean breeze,
Getting hotter,
Two Pina Coladas,
On the radio,
Ain’t no troubles,
I’m seeing double,
T-shirts getting wetter,
It don’t get much better you know,
Chorus:
They say beaches be crazy,
Layin’ out in the sand,
Spend the day being lazy,
Working on a sun tan,
With these cold margaritas,
You know things can get hazy,
All these hot senoritas,
You know beaches be crazy!
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:40 am to LSUTigersVCURams
It would be better if it was the last text from a passed away wife. you know in the same vein as He stopped loving her today. Country Music Paydirt.
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:43 am to fr33manator
quote:
Chorus...
well I see those ellipses,
And they say you might miss me,
But you never seem to finish your reply,
Is it just time we’re wasting,
Words you keep erasing,
Wonder when you’ll send your last goodbye,
Tear stained pillows on your bed,
And it seems “i’m Sorry”’s left unread
.
Posted on 10/3/19 at 10:43 am to fr33manator
quote:
i’ll Post some of my funny ones here. If someone steals it, oh well, at least it will get played.
you have a gift my brother
I'll have to dig up Missin' You 
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