re: Has anyone read Michael Obama's college thesis?

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At the same time , however, it is conceivable that my four years of exposure to a predominately White, Ivy League University has instilled within me certain conservative values. For example, as I enter my final year at Princeton, I find myself striving for many of the same goals as my White classmates--acceptance to a prestigious graduate or professional school or high paying position in a successful corporation. Thus, my goals after Princeton are not as clear as before.

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This paragraph in her Introduction says a lot. Does the black community see getting into a good school or getting a high paying job as something inherently white?

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She only got to where she is because she is black and a woman.

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good old black woman privilege

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What were her goals upon entering Princeton?

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crack dealer?

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At the same time , however, it is conceivable that my four years of exposure to a predominately White, Ivy League University has instilled within me certain conservative values. For example, as I enter my final year at Princeton, I find myself striving for many of the same goals as my White classmates--acceptance to a prestigious graduate or professional school or high paying position in a successful corporation. Thus, my goals after Princeton are not as clear as before.

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I have never read the remainder of it, but this is actually fairly well-written. Certainly better than 75% of what we see here.

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but this is actually fairly well-written

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hmmmmmm

it is indeed written, but what makes it "well-written"

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Zero hank.

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“Life sucks and everyone hates me because I’m black.” By Michele Obama future multimillionaire, cultural icon and First Lady.

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I have never read the remainder of it, but this is actually fairly well-written. Certainly better than 75% of what we see here.

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Don't waste your time, here is an abridged version for your consideration. She not bee 2 smart.

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A little more substance is needed here

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I'm gonna have to downvote you there, brother, no one needs to see that

This was in no way illiterate or incoherent.