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re: Twas the night before Heisman, an original poem

Posted on 12/9/23 at 9:38 am to
Posted by Klingler7
Houston
Member since Nov 2009
12620 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 9:38 am to
That is fine writing right there.
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
134620 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 9:43 am to
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Well done maestro! Ok…did ChatGPT AI assist with this poetic composition?


The day I need a robot to rhyme is the day Vandy wins the Natty
Posted by BornAndRaised_LA
Springfield, VA
Member since Oct 2018
6685 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 9:58 am to
You do MUCH MUCH better than ChatGPT:

'Twas the night before game day, in Baton Rouge's embrace,
Excitement abounded, anticipation in each face.
The helmets were hung, a symbol of might,
In hopes that Coach Kelly would lead to the light.

The players were nestled, dreams of touchdowns in sight,
With visions of glory, and a quarterback's might.
Jayden Daniels, with skill to amaze,
Guiding the Tigers through victorious days.

The moon cast its glow on the field down below,
Where dreams were pursued with each ebb and each flow.
Away on the turf, there arose such a cheer,
For Coach Kelly's guidance and Daniels' career.

The fans in the stands, a sea of delight,
Cheering for triumph in the stadium's light.
With precision and strategy, a symphony of play,
They hoped for success in the LSU display.

Coach Kelly, so focused, a leader so true,
Plotting and planning for the battles they'd rue.
With Daniels at helm, the quarterback's grace,
A dynamic duo, a formidable embrace.

The clock winding down, anticipation so grand,
In the heart of Louisiana, a football-loving land.
May victories unfold, and glory be found,
In the LSU kingdom, forever renowned.
This post was edited on 12/9/23 at 11:02 am
Posted by Tiger1988
Houston
Member since May 2016
30749 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 11:46 am to
Posted by GRTiger
On a roof eating alligator pie
Member since Dec 2008
71044 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 11:51 am to
Excellent work, Fr33
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
134620 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 1:33 pm to
It just doesn't have any soul, or wit, or nuance.

Utterly empty and hollow
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
134620 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 6:53 pm to
Thanks
Posted by js1591
Member since Jan 2020
2967 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 7:28 pm to
Well Done!!!!
Posted by Enadious
formerly B5Lurker City of Central
Member since Aug 2004
18633 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 7:45 pm to
Nice!!!
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
134620 posts
Posted on 12/9/23 at 8:15 pm to
I never had any doubt. Kicking myself for not placing a beat earlier this season though
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
134620 posts
Posted on 12/10/23 at 2:39 pm to
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Very high quality prose, right there.


Thanks. Pretty sure it qualifies as poetry though
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