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The View From Halfway Down
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:19 pm
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:19 pm
quote:
The weak breeze whispers nothing
The water screams sublime
His feet shift, teeter-totter
Deep breath, stand back, it’s time
Toes untouch the overpass
Soon he’s water bound
Eyes locked shut but peek to see
The view from halfway down
A little wind, a summer sun
A river rich and regal
A flood of fond endorphins
Brings a calm that knows no equal
You’re flying now
You see things much more clear
Than from the ground
It’s all okay, or it would be
Were you not now halfway down
Thrash to break from gravity
What now could slow the drop
All I’d give for toes to touch
The safety back at top
But this is it, the deed is done
Silence drowns the sound
Before I leaped I should’ve seen
The view from halfway down
I really should’ve thought about
The view from halfway down
I wish I could’ve known about
The view from halfway down
To anyone with severe depression, anxiety, and loneliness over this, you’re worth it. Stay in there.
This post was edited on 4/15/20 at 11:27 pm
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:22 pm to OMLandshark
You sir are a good dude!!
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:26 pm to OMLandshark
My goodness that’s profound
Thanks for posting
Thanks for posting
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:31 pm to OMLandshark
A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:32 pm to Walt OReilly
quote:
A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out
It might
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:41 pm to OMLandshark
Very helpful. And -not joking- would also be relevant in the Mississippi River swim thread.
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:23 am to Walt OReilly
quote:
A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out
No. But they could post it on Facebook and get a little attention before they do
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:41 am to Walt OReilly
Actually Walter this is about jumping not brain blowing out.
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:09 am to OMLandshark
Can opener or cannon ball?
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:10 am to OMLandshark
Does this have anything to do with your sister?
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:14 am to Rebel
No, a scene from Bojack Horseman that aired while I was banned. And please delete that. Thank you.
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