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The View From Halfway Down

Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:19 pm
Posted by OMLandshark
Member since Apr 2009
120445 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:19 pm
quote:

The weak breeze whispers nothing
The water screams sublime
His feet shift, teeter-totter
Deep breath, stand back, it’s time

Toes untouch the overpass
Soon he’s water bound
Eyes locked shut but peek to see
The view from halfway down

A little wind, a summer sun
A river rich and regal
A flood of fond endorphins
Brings a calm that knows no equal

You’re flying now
You see things much more clear
Than from the ground
It’s all okay, or it would be
Were you not now halfway down

Thrash to break from gravity
What now could slow the drop
All I’d give for toes to touch
The safety back at top

But this is it, the deed is done
Silence drowns the sound
Before I leaped I should’ve seen
The view from halfway down

I really should’ve thought about
The view from halfway down
I wish I could’ve known about
The view from halfway down


To anyone with severe depression, anxiety, and loneliness over this, you’re worth it. Stay in there.
This post was edited on 4/15/20 at 11:27 pm
Posted by rsbd
banks of the Mississippi
Member since Jan 2007
23472 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:22 pm to
You sir are a good dude!!
Posted by RaginTXTiger
Boynton Beach, FL
Member since Jan 2016
724 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:23 pm to
Nice.
Posted by LSUJML
Central
Member since May 2008
56852 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:26 pm to
My goodness that’s profound

Thanks for posting
Posted by Walt OReilly
Poplarville, MS
Member since Oct 2005
124694 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:31 pm to
A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out
Posted by OMLandshark
Member since Apr 2009
120445 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:32 pm to
quote:

A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out


It might
Posted by DeCat ODahouse
Premium Member
Member since Jan 2017
1710 posts
Posted on 4/15/20 at 11:41 pm to
Very helpful. And -not joking- would also be relevant in the Mississippi River swim thread.
Posted by OMLandshark
Member since Apr 2009
120445 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:19 am to
Bump for day crew
Posted by Mr. Hangover
New Orleans
Member since Sep 2003
34932 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:23 am to
quote:

A poem isn’t going to stop someone from blowing their brains out


No. But they could post it on Facebook and get a little attention before they do
Posted by TIGRLEE
Northeast Louisiana
Member since Nov 2009
31493 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:41 am to
Actually Walter this is about jumping not brain blowing out.
Posted by NawlinsTiger9
Where the mongooses roam
Member since Jan 2009
40527 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 9:45 am to
quote:

OMLandshark



Posted by White Bear
Homeless
Member since Jul 2014
17815 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:09 am to
Can opener or cannon ball?
Posted by Rebel
Graceland
Member since Jan 2005
144681 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:10 am to
Does this have anything to do with your sister?
Posted by OMLandshark
Member since Apr 2009
120445 posts
Posted on 4/16/20 at 10:14 am to
No, a scene from Bojack Horseman that aired while I was banned. And please delete that. Thank you.
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