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Posted on 10/16/24 at 2:50 pm to fr33manator
Posted on 10/16/24 at 3:32 pm to fr33manator
This is bad. You should be embarrassed
Posted on 10/16/24 at 3:33 pm to fr33manator
Posted on 10/16/24 at 3:38 pm to fr33manator
quote:
"Suck that, Tiger Dicks, Bitch."
I read it all looking for this.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 3:51 pm to fr33manator
Cliffs? I ain’t reading that, but I’ll read a live action thread in its entirety.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 4:01 pm to fr33manator
Posted on 10/16/24 at 4:14 pm to fr33manator
The final confrontation by the old Lordon McFerman (or whatever) building - was it entirely fictional?
Posted on 10/16/24 at 5:53 pm to Bigfishchoupique
Likewise
Posted on 10/16/24 at 5:56 pm to fr33manator
quote:
Tiger Dicks pulled back
Thats no way to start a story that you actually want heterosexual men to continue reading
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:18 pm to fr33manator
quote:
fr33manator
You're a gifted writer.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:19 pm to fr33manator
I enjoyed it 
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:23 pm to fr33manator
This is awesome. 
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:23 pm to lshuge
Eh it's just chatGPT. I told it to write a film noir parody story about tailgate theft featuring characters from the OT lounge and that's what it spat out.
This post was edited on 10/16/24 at 6:38 pm
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:23 pm to HoboDickCheese
Can I just rent the movie when it comes out ? I don’t like reading epic tales.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 6:29 pm to fr33manator
You seem like a nice guy Freeman. Here’s some simple, unsolicited advice.
Learn how and when to drop the mic.
Learn how and when to drop the mic.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 7:30 pm to fr33manator
Creative writing isn’t easy I envy you or anyone who can do that. You nailed the 1950’s detective novel or film noir script.
Got all the innuendo and enjoyed it.
Kudos to you.
Got all the innuendo and enjoyed it.
Kudos to you.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 7:30 pm to HoboDickCheese
quote:
I enjoyed it
Better than being a bike thief? A little shoehorned but I thought you'd enjoy the over the top nature. And if you paid attention, your fate is uncertain...
I don't have any future plans but didn't want to kill you off Hobo
Posted on 10/16/24 at 7:38 pm to Mr Breeze
quote:
You nailed the 1950’s detective novel or film noir script
It was written in a completely hamfisted, over the top style by design. No part of this was serious.
"They said in unison, together."
"up on Cripple Creek, he sends me. O'Weelo."
"Dick Long dickered with his dick double, who dealt Dickens,"
Trying to tap into a naked gun feel a bit. The mistakes were intentional.
Never written in the style before so figured I'd stuff what I could into the story, and it came out. Lots of OT service.
I think my favorite joke in the whole thing was "Gin Rummy, who sold Bourbon."
quote:
Got all the innuendo and enjoyed it.
Glad someone did. It was a labor of love. Enough people seemed to enjoy the first part it seemed a shame not to follow through on my original premise.
Posted on 10/16/24 at 7:40 pm to fr33manator
quote:I was the savior of the story, I’m good with it
I don't have any future plans but didn't want to kill you off Hobo
Eta: The running Rummy joke was funny and the Madamesquirrel lines were damn funny
This post was edited on 10/16/24 at 7:46 pm
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