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re: 20 year old mother executed while pushing stroller in NYC

Posted on 6/30/22 at 11:37 am to
Posted by keakar
Member since Jan 2017
30118 posts
Posted on 6/30/22 at 11:37 am to
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Yes, the mother of the woman who was killed.



thats not how it was written

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The mother of a 20-year-old woman shot in the back of the head

reads the mother of a 20 yr old was shot

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The mother of a 20-year-old woman who was shot in the back of the head


this is how it is supposed to read if the 20 yr old was shot and not the mom

basic writing skills died when CRT became more important then reading, math, and science in schools
This post was edited on 6/30/22 at 11:38 am
Posted by EZE Tiger Fan
Member since Jul 2004
50390 posts
Posted on 6/30/22 at 11:40 am to
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this is how it is supposed to read if the 20 yr old was shot and not the mom


Like I said in the other thread:

Democrats control education and the media. They cater to the LCD in our society. Democrat voters aren't that smart and easily manipulated, so this is the product you get.
Posted by 777Tiger
Member since Mar 2011
73856 posts
Posted on 6/30/22 at 11:42 am to
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basic writing skills died when CRT became more important then reading, math, and science in schools



best friend from hs is a retired sports writer(Times-Picayune,) I was asking him about the shitty writing these days, he said for several years young writers are being instructed to just get something out there first, we'll worry about facts, grammar, spell check later, just be first to get it on the media
Posted by Mo Jeaux
Member since Aug 2008
59052 posts
Posted on 6/30/22 at 11:47 am to
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thats not how it was written


Read the whole sentence. Sure, it could be written more clearly, but it's not incorrect.
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