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re: Rate my short horror story 1-10
Posted on 10/27/20 at 9:54 pm to diddlydawg7
Posted on 10/27/20 at 9:54 pm to diddlydawg7
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He wet the towel and was about to apply it to his hair
Overall, a fairly good written tale, but I don't think the use of "about to..." is the best literary verbage to use here.
And "fixing to..." isn't any better. LoL
This post was edited on 10/27/20 at 9:55 pm
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Posted on 10/27/20 at 9:55 pm to East Coast Band
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Overall, a fairly good written tale, but 6 don't think the use of "about to..." is the best literary verbage to use here.
Should have gone with "fixin to"
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