re: These MSU fans are really insulting LSU

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Tigers living in Spartans heads without rent Your economy stinks like your personal hygiene scent Detroit is a s*** hole as the president would say Motor vehicle industry more in debt each day Go drink some water from Flint

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No, no. See, that just doesn't work as a limerick.
Really nice color but zero rhythm and then even the rhyme broke down at the end.
Please, allow me to help.
You'll get the hang of it...

Spartans have Tigers in heads with no rent
Economy stinks like their hygiene-less scent
Detroit a s*** hole like our prez might just say
Car industry failing, more debt every day
Drink some Flint water, geaux get yourself bent.