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re: How solid is this for an 8yr anniversary gift?

Posted on 9/15/15 at 1:33 pm to
Posted by link
Member since Feb 2009
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Posted on 9/15/15 at 1:33 pm to
it's not a haiku
should have five, seven, and then
five more syllables
Posted by Lokistale
Member since Aug 2013
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Posted on 9/15/15 at 1:49 pm to
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it's not a haiku


I was just about to point that out.

The poem is not even very romantic for young couples... especially for a 'love poem'... which usually convey that both the author and the recipient are going in the same direction. However, in this poem... one is falling, but the other is flying away...

This poem is best for elderly couples celebrating... 50th anniversaries... translating 'don't worry about me kicking the bucket... I want you to going on and enjoy life... and get that BBC...
This post was edited on 9/15/15 at 1:54 pm
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