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re: Video of Holy Cross player knocking out man in Bourbon Street brawl
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:33 pm to Ed Osteen
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:33 pm to Ed Osteen
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Exactly, I don’t understand how anyone is arguing that it’s a clear and well written article.
Because it is clear.
You'd think the mensa members on the OT would have no issues reading it.
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:34 pm
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Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:33 pm to TH03
We usually agree on most, did you write this article or something?
How are you argeuing that it’s not poorly worded?
Anyone reading a short article online shouldnt have to reread some of it to make sure what it says. Clearly the majority of people in this thread found it poorly worded on its initial read
How are you argeuing that it’s not poorly worded?
Anyone reading a short article online shouldnt have to reread some of it to make sure what it says. Clearly the majority of people in this thread found it poorly worded on its initial read
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:36 pm
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:35 pm to LNCHBOX
I honestly don't think it was unclear though.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:35 pm to TH03
When you say that night, you are going to make alot, if not most, people infer you are describing the night in the preceding sentence.
"Danny had a good weekend this past friday.
Debbie wore her pink sexy underwear under her short skirt last march. That night, her boyfriend danny got lucky"
So, reading that, we are supposed to naturally know "that night" is talking about this weekend mentioned in the paragraph before?
"Danny had a good weekend this past friday.
Debbie wore her pink sexy underwear under her short skirt last march. That night, her boyfriend danny got lucky"
So, reading that, we are supposed to naturally know "that night" is talking about this weekend mentioned in the paragraph before?
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:37 pm
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:36 pm to TH03
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I honestly don't think it was unclear though.
It's like you didn't even read my post
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:37 pm to lsupride87
I mean I understand that, but the 3 sentences all had the same beginning.
I guess it would be better to say "Friday his charges, pending since March, were dropped. That night blah blah blah:
I guess it would be better to say "Friday his charges, pending since March, were dropped. That night blah blah blah:
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:37 pm to TH03
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I honestly don't think it was unclear though.
I believe you. But don't you think that despite whether or not it's clear to you, if multiple people read an article, and several have trouble understanding it until they reread it, that it might have room for improvement? Even though you didn't have a problem, the writer could have done a better job so that everyone could have understood?
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:38 pm to LNCHBOX
Sorry, replace unclear for poorly written.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:39 pm to TH03
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Sorry, replace unclear for poorly written.
Well, then I disagree with your opinion. It is absolutely poorly written. The fact that this is being debated this many pages into the thread is all the evidence you need.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:39 pm to Ed Osteen
Sometimes they don't. Have two charges before 18 is pretty awful. You had the same criminal past?
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:41 pm
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:40 pm to Festus
I mean obviously there's some issues with reading it, but I never had them so I'm struggling to make myself see how someone got confused reading it.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:41 pm to LNCHBOX
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The fact that this is being debated this many pages into the thread is all the evidence you need.
This board will argue anything
The evidence needed is just that some of y'all got confused so it's clearly not a well written article. I just read it clearly so I didn't think it was.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:42 pm to TH03
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This board will argue anything
It's funny, because you're being the contrarian in this thread.
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The evidence needed is just that some of y'all got confused so it's clearly not a well written article. I just read it clearly so I didn't think it was.
Get over yourself. You're not super smart for figuring out the article. It's still poorly written.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:43 pm to TH03
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I mean obviously there's some issues with reading it,
Then in my opinion, by definition, it's poorly written. A professional writer shouldn't release an article if it has some issues with reading it. He should proofread it, and corrections made so that the issues are removed.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:43 pm to LNCHBOX
Dude I'm literally agreeing with you and if anything, calling myself stupid since I'm the one who didn't see it. Chill out.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:44 pm to Festus
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Then in my opinion, by definition, it's poorly written. A professional writer shouldn't release an article if it has some issues with reading it. He should proofread it, and corrections made so that the issues are removed.
This should be the end of this conversation
Somehow, I'm guessing it won't be.
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:44 pm
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:44 pm to Festus
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Then in my opinion, by definition, it's poorly written. A professional writer shouldn't release an article if it has some issues with reading it. He should proofread it, and corrections made so that the issues are removed.
I can agree with all of that.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:44 pm to Festus
I think this kid played a lot of travel baseball if I remember correctly
This post was edited on 10/9/17 at 3:47 pm
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:45 pm to TH03
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I can agree with all of that.
You saved yourself.... my next post was going to be the WUT meme of you and the 2 chicks.
Grats on married life.
Posted on 10/9/17 at 3:46 pm to Festus
Thanks man.
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