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New rap for this hot summer...

Posted on 5/25/12 at 12:20 pm
Posted by Perrilloux4QB
Souf Baton Rouj
Member since Nov 2011
81 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 12:20 pm
Hey, I'm a 27 yr. old grad student from Baton Rouge.

I've mainly been producing lately, but I just messed around and made this rap...

THOUGHTS ARE APPRECIATED!

"Ceiling Fan" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J2wCuWmgv0Q
This post was edited on 5/25/12 at 12:43 pm
Posted by Elleshoe
Wade’s World
Member since Jun 2004
143616 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 12:24 pm to
that beat is fricking terrible and you aren't nearly as funny as krispy kreme
Posted by Flair Chops
to the west, my soul is bound
Member since Nov 2010
35573 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 12:55 pm to
the beat is not very good.
quote:

fricking terrible
probably better describes it, but i'm trying to give you constructive criticism. i didn't even listen to it because the beat was making my ears bleed, and not in a good way
Posted by windriver
West Monroe/San Diego
Member since Mar 2006
8656 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 1:13 pm to
No offense intended but you asked so I will tell you...it SUCKS.
Posted by Rickety Cricket
Premium Member
Member since Aug 2007
46883 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 1:19 pm to
There's only one rapper in these parts, and he goes by the name of Jay muthafrickin Cee.

Posted by tkr1407
Nawfiest Laweezianna
Member since Aug 2011
3132 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 4:16 pm to
Do you actually think that this is good music?? Sorry to burst your bubble, but if you produced this, just quit and find a different job! Absolutely terrible!
Posted by ElroyJetSon
Baton Rouge
Member since Jul 2011
4018 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 6:10 pm to
Posted by 7thWardTiger
Richmond, Texas
Member since Nov 2009
24670 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 6:48 pm to
I'm gonna be painfully honest here brah.


That shite was absoloutely horrible. And when I say horrible, I mean burning dog shite horrible. From the beat to the lyrics to the hook. The entire song.
Posted by Patrick O Rly
y u do dis?
Member since Aug 2011
41187 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 7:59 pm to
Do you have anything else? You might wanna rework that beat. It sounds like you found the most annoying sounds on your keyboard or whatever and built the beat around that.

As far as the rapping, you told us you're a grad student, so when you're rapping about duck tapping money to a ceiling fan, it sounds really dumb. Rap about something that's actually applicable to you. Otherwise no one will give you a second listen. Be creative. Rap about a bad bowel movement or a shite professor, something besides hustling, which I'm 99% sure you're not doing.
This post was edited on 5/25/12 at 8:01 pm
Posted by benderama
Member since Apr 2012
200 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 8:14 pm to
dude, you already sold out... u put ads?
Posted by benderama
Member since Apr 2012
200 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 8:16 pm to
producing skills= not good. beat is wack.

rapper= your 27 better quit... move on


Posted by Walt OReilly
Poplarville, MS
Member since Oct 2005
124694 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 8:50 pm to
maybe you and THATLSUBOY can collaborate together
Posted by Srbtiger06
Member since Apr 2006
28277 posts
Posted on 5/25/12 at 11:32 pm to
I'm speechless.

Take it how you want.
Posted by Rig
BHM
Member since Aug 2011
41856 posts
Posted on 5/26/12 at 11:30 am to
This beat......
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