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re: Tourists ruined this beautiful Hawaiian attraction — so it’s being demolished

Posted on 4/17/24 at 5:22 pm to
Posted by mdomingue
Lafayette, LA
Member since Nov 2010
31169 posts
Posted on 4/17/24 at 5:22 pm to
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quote:

Those damn haoles
Beautiful landmark ruined
No stairway for you



Baw, great effort but,
Haole is two syllables,
So not a haiku



A simple edit would fix it

Those trashy haoles
Beautiful landmark ruined
No stairway for you

or

Trashy damn haoles
Beautiful landmark ruined
No stairway for you

Posted by Bestbank Tiger
Premium Member
Member since Jan 2005
71757 posts
Posted on 4/17/24 at 9:26 pm to
quote:


A simple edit would fix it

Those trashy haoles
Beautiful landmark ruined
No stairway for you

or

Trashy damn haoles
Beautiful landmark ruined
No stairway for you


That worked. I didn't realize haole rhymed with ahole. But we got fr33manator poetry out of it so it's a win.
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