Writing my first novel

For the last 6 months I have been working on a novel. I have completed my first rough draft. I sent the full document to some friends I trust to read and give me feedback. I am continuing to make revisions (not structurally just tighten some areas). I am looking to see if this is something that others would feel like reading based on the pitch idea. My ultimate goal is to write a series of novels with this main character and 2 supporting characters. I have the story planned for the 2nd novel. Here is the pitch idea :

When a former Navy JAG officer is framed for the murder of a colleague, he must team up with his allies to uncover a long-buried conspiracy tied to his biggest case — before a powerful figure from his past destroys everything he has left.
The story features a layered intellectual villain, a capable hero who's trying to leave violence behind, strong female characters who pull their weight, and a D.C. setting that mixes political power, gritty alleys, and hidden threats. It builds to a tense final act with real personal stakes and justice served through (mostly) the system.

Any feedback is welcome. Thank you