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re: What’s a funnier line, A or B
Posted on 7/2/25 at 2:19 pm to AwgustaDawg
Posted on 7/2/25 at 2:19 pm to AwgustaDawg
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While not overly funny B has the elements of a joke while A lacks the same.
B has conciseness...."brevity is the soul of wit" Willaim Shakespear. It does not have anything unecessary, it gets to the point.
Mis-direction - one assumes the speaker will explain why the restaurant is no longer popular....which leads to the punchline....it's too crowded...not what one would have expected, if no one is going it can't be crowded. Again, not overly funny but the elements are there.
A is far from concise...it works better as "I hate British movies....they don't speak English". The misdirection and punchline are sort of there but its long winded..."I can't understand them" is superfluous, its implied. It works in a manner but it requires the listener to listen longer the way it is. It might work somewhat better with a slight pause between "they don't speak English...." and "I can't understand them....." but that is still pushing the boundary of brevity.
Its also superfluous to include "know how to".....that sort of kills the misdirection element, it explains why they don't speak English, they do not know how to, which in turn explains why the speaker did not understand the British movie. "I hate British movies....they don't speak English" is a superior humorous point, not overly funny but contains the elements of a joke, conciseness, misdirection and the punch line.
And then lectures about being concise...
Damn.
Posted on 7/2/25 at 2:50 pm to Skippy1013
My cat’s breath smells like cat food.
Posted on 7/2/25 at 3:03 pm to LCA131
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And then lectures about being concise...
Damn.
So the "lecture" was about the structure of a joke....one element of which is conciseness. The "lecture" was not an example of a joke....it was not written as a joke and therefore there is no element of conciseness ...
BUT...you post is a pretty good example of a joke written in exactly the same manner as the "lecture" spelled....and it was as funny or funnier than either the examples in the OP....
Posted on 7/2/25 at 3:03 pm to Huey Lewis
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Thanks chatgpt
And another example of a concise and well crafted joke...nice!
Posted on 7/2/25 at 3:39 pm to profdillweed
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If a restaurant is crowded, that means it’s a good restaurant
It does?
Posted on 7/2/25 at 4:15 pm to AwgustaDawg
quote:Norm MacDonald would like 15 minutes of your time
"brevity is the soul of wit" Willaim Shakespear.
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