re: Songwriting thread? Is there a way it could work on here?

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Just a good ole baw Eatin a corn dog

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Just a good ole Baw Eatin a corndog
His wife is screamin that the toilet is clogged
She always finds a way to kill his buzz
Turnin out to be just like her Mamma was

Crochet doylies appear from thin air
ceramic chickens are peckin everywhere
He never thought life would end up this way
And it gets worse everyday

When you need a witch doctor you can't find one
Where are the voodoo queens
When you need some voodoo done?-askin for a friend
He could really use a magic spell or two
living a nightmare on the bayou

She just sits at the table in the kitchen
studying book of faces like religion
She never wants to go kayakin or fishin - anymore
She aint the fun gal that she was before

I'm starting to get a Beatles vibe..Maybe more Tom Petty
Just picking it fast A7 D7 E7 throwing C7 and F#minor here and there

Working Title : Nightmare On The Bayou? A lot there to work with.
..well SUB..you started this..You done now?
Anybody want to kick in a few lines?
Really thinkin about finishing this and recording it.