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re: Letter From B.R. Attorney Re: Lack of National Media Coverage Goes Viral

Posted on 8/21/16 at 8:17 am to
Posted by ILikeLSUToo
Central, LA
Member since Jan 2008
18018 posts
Posted on 8/21/16 at 8:17 am to
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You should always proof read your work; and your first sentence should be attention grabbing, grammatically correct, and a hook for the reader. He was missing all of those elements.

That letter reads like the ramblings of a whiny bitch. There are much more efficient ways to get your point across.



Yeah, I thought attorneys were supposed to be competent writers. This thing needs an editor in the worst way.
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