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Posted on 3/3/14 at 11:09 pm to
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Posted on 3/3/14 at 11:09 pm to
Scott found an old rag and tied it around Daniel's hand, staunching the flow of blood. They stood up and looked around the cellar once more. "Should we go now?" Joel queried uncertainly. "Hell no!", Daniel replied. He grabbed the broken bottle of wine off the floor and threw it at the feasting cat in the corner, sending it scurrying into the darkness at the other end of the cellar once more with a hiss. "This is the best find we've ever had. I'm not gonna let a little cut and some stupid cat chase us away. We've got all weekend to check out this score." The other two shrugged and resumed, finishing off their wine before opening three new bottles.

They made their way to the corner where the cat and the rat had come from and looked around. Behind the toppled boxes was another door. It looked ancient, dark oak planks with a heavy latch and an old rusted lock, the sort that was opened with those classic style keys. "Now this is money." Daniel crowed, kicking boxes out of the way to clear the space. He walked back towards the stairs and returned with his crowbar in his bandaged hand. "Luckily I brought my skeleton key."

He jammed the beak of his crowbar into the wood behind the latch, digging it deep, then grunting laboriously as he hefted against the rusted metal, to no avail. He tried again, straining, but with as much luck. "Are you two gonna just stand there with your fingers up your asses or give me a hand here?" He shot accusing looks at his two friends, who looked dumbfounded for a moment before setting their bottles down and grabbing hold of the iron haft. "Okay, on three. One...two...three!" They lurched upwards in unison, putting all their weight into the effort, and after a few seconds of resisting the latch gave up the ghost and bolted free from the door frame with a crash, swinging limply, the tenacious lock still attached but as good as useless now. The three panted triumphantly at their accomplishment, then looked at each other, as if wondering what to do next.
"Well, go ahead and open it!" Daniel's command fell flat in the lantern light, echoing off the basement's stone walls.
"You open it." Joel said nervously, accompanied by a nod of agreement from Scott.
"Don't be such a pussy." Daniel's tone was menacing, but held an air of apprehension as well, "scared another kitty cat is gonna jump out and scare you?"
"Whatever. I'll do it." Scott brushed Daniel aside and grabbed the rusted handle, "since you don't have the balls."

He gave the door a tug and it swung heavily outward, making the group stumble back. A damp smell of rotten wood and mold and stale air filled their nostrils, making them purse their lips and wrinkle their noses unconsciously. They peered into the blackness together...an unsettling silence broken only by the sound of their breathing and the faint creaking of disused hinges. Scott grabbed the lantern as the other two brought their flashlights, shining them in tandem to ward off the permeating darkness of the room.

At first glance the room seemed empty, bare stone walls, great big blocks stacked in an uneven pattern, about twelve feet by twelve feet. Daniel shoved past Scott and stepped into the room, shining his light one way, then another, stepping a foot further into the dark. His friends followed slowly after.
Joel placed his hand behind him on the wall as he edged around the room, feeling the dampness of the smooth stones. He brought his light up to the ceiling in the middle of the room. Hanging in the center was a single light bulb on a cord, its pull string barely swaying with the movement of their intrusion into this seemingly forgotten hideaway. Scott warily trod towards the center and pulled on it, and all three gasped as the lone bulb responded, flickering once, twice, then staying on, chasing away the black with warm yellow light.

"Did anyone think to try the switches?" He asked the others.
"Did anyone think to try the switches?" Daniel mimicked his question in a mocking tone, then shook his head.
"I tried upstairs but nothing came on," Scott offered, "this must be on an older circuit that didn't get cut off."

The three looked down simultaneously, all spying the same object at once. It was a wooden box, roughly a foot wide, long, and deep, with a wooden top. No latch. No lock. "What the hell is inside it?", Daniel wondered out loud, asking the question that was at the forefront of all their minds.
"I'm not sure I want to know." Joel pointed a finger at the wall the door had been on, where they hadn't looked before. This wall was concrete, and much newer than the others. In the same ruddy brown paint had been written on the wall, in large, hand painted letters.

DON'T LOOK IN THE BOX.

The all mouthed the words silently, slowly. So ominous, almost taunting. For several interminable moments none of them spoke, only read the words there over and over and over. Daniel broke the eerie stillness. "Well we have to look in it now. There could be anything in there. Money. Jewelry. Gold even."
Joel shook his head from side to side in a furious arc. "No. No no no no no no no." He was adamant. " I don't care. I don't wanna know. Let's just go. I don't feel well."
Scott and Daniel looked at him, intrigued by his sudden fear. He wasn't always the most fearless among them, but they'd never known him to shy from such a tempting prospect.

"Dude, it's probably just something the owners left to scare off intruders." Daniel said. "Like us." Scott muttered solemnly.
Joel was resolute. "No, I don't want to know and I don't care. Seriously guys, what if it's a trap or something?" The fear was palpable in his voice, which was quavering at this point. "Let's go. I'm getting out of here."
He made to leave when Daniel's outstretched palm stopped him, shoving back against his chest. His heart was pounding at this point.
"You aren't going anywhere." The final word from Daniel's lips was pure intimidation, his lips forming into a sneer. "We came here together, and we'll leave together. And we aren't leaving until we get whatever is in the box."

Posted by fr33manator
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Posted on 3/3/14 at 11:09 pm to
Joel looked to Scott for help, but found none in his friend's eyes. "Danny's right. We are the first ones in who knows how long to find this. If we leave whoever was here before might come back and get it before we do, and then this whole thing was pointless. We'll take what's in the box and then we can go."
Daniel straightened his posture and poked out his chest. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a silver dollar. "Tell you what. We'll flip the coin. Heads, we open the box. Tails, we grab some wine and go home."
Joel glared at Daniel, then sighed with an answer of surrender. "Okay. Best 2 out of 3 though." All three boys nodded as Daniel fingered the coin in his hand, a dull silver glint reflecting off its surface.

"We each get one flip. Then we open it." Daniel surely stated. He handed the coin to Scott first. "Heads we open it, tails we leave." Scott nodded. He made a fist and fingered the coin into the crook of his index finger, his thumb poised beneath it. With a swift, practiced pop of his thumb he sent the silver dollar spinning end over end, flipping in the air until it reached the apex of its ascent and fell back down into his open palm, his fingers instantly clutching around it and slapping it onto the top of his left arm. He brought it closer to his face and lifted his right hand ever so slightly, then pulled it back to reveal the result to the others.

Tails

Joel let a quiet sigh go.

Daniel came next, turning the coin over a few times in his fingers before adopting the same technique as his friend. Over and over it turned in the air, landing with and audible plap in his bandaged right palm and swiftly slapped on his opposing forearm. He revealed it with a smirk.

Heads.

He handed it to Joel with a sneering grin. "For all the marbles in the box, buddy..." The last syllable drug out in what seemed like an eternity. Joel set his flashlight down, looking at the light dangling from the heavy oaken rafters, then down at the box sitting all alone in that dank cellar room, then at the words scrawled on the wall, their ochre warning menacing.

DON'T LOOK IN THE BOX.

DON'T LOOK IN THE BOX.

DON'T LOOK IN THE BOX.

The letters seared into his brain, taunting him. His escape was so close he could taste it. One flip of the coin and he could go, away from this accursed room and that damnable box and whatever horrid thing that lurked inside it. He was sweating bullets now despite the cold dampness of the room. His heart palpitating with a terrible "ka-thump ka-thump ka-thump ka-thump", blood coursing through his ears. Why did he come here? He could just bowl over Danny and make a mad dash out the basement and this awful house now. Screw the box!
"Do it!" Danny growled, "hurry the hell up, pussy!"

His hands were trembling. He placed the coin with one hand into his fist, then weakly popped his thumb, the silver circle of his fate warbling in the air.
Headstailsheadstailsheadstailsheadstails. Over and over and over and it was coming down now oh god oh god oh god oh god.

Plap. Into his shaky, sweaty palm, his fingers clinching immediately with no delay around the damned coin and then furiously against the flat of his arm. He held it there, trying to divine the feel of what it would reveal, terror filling his senses to the brim at what it would be.

Daniel yanked his palm away, and for an instant he saw glorious tails before it shook loose and tumbled to the dirt floor in a heavy thump.
"It's tails" Joel screamed, "tails!"
They all looked at the floor, the coin laying there bathed in that cold illumination of the solitary false sun.

Heads.

"It was tails!" Joel cried, his voice taking on a tremulous timbre of sheer and abject desperation. He turned towards the door to run but Daniel grabbed him and they tumbled to the floor in a struggling heap, Joel kicking and screaming "Tails! Tails! He grabbed my hand! It was tails!" They landed in front of the box, striking it with a thud. The top was knocked askew, almost off. They stopped moving and all three stared at it.

Joel struggled to turn away from it but found he couldn't. All three felt compelled to look closer, inch by agonizing inch.
In silence Daniel moved the top off the rest of the way.
Inside was a faded Polaroid picture. He picked it up out of the box and held it up in the dim yellow light. At first they couldn't tell what it was a picture of, like it hadn't fully developed yet. They looked closer, and it became clearer, second by second. It was a picture of them.

In a flash the light gave an audible pop and hiss, then went black. In the darkness they heard the creak of the hinges and a heavy thunk as the door swung shut.


And in the blackness, they screamed.
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