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re: Alex Ferguson of Sky Sports - First Trip to LSU/Tiger Stadium

Posted on 11/9/12 at 12:54 pm to
Posted by vl100butch
Ridgeland, MS
Member since Sep 2005
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Posted on 11/9/12 at 12:54 pm to
remember, he's writing this for a British audience that doesn't know the first thing about American college football....
Posted by SouthOfSouth
Baton Rouge
Member since Jun 2008
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Posted on 11/9/12 at 1:30 pm to
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remember, he's writing this for a British audience that doesn't know the first thing about American college football....


That's fine, but he shouldn't even have to say at the end that it's a must go for a sports fan... It should be evident in his writing. I didn't even know if he enjoyed his trip until he said so at the end. It isn't hard to write with descriptive words. His sentences were choppy and uncreative, his use of description was less that modest and even if people don't know the first thing about American football, he didn't teach a thing to the readers.
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