re: My answer to Alleva

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perfect

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Well, not exactly:

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It is also true that LSU was and will be again, an elite program.

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Erroneously placed, unnecessary comma

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It is true again that you would not have written a letter to the fan base and supporters of the program if it were not for pressure you were receiving regarding the direction of the program.

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True again? What does that mean?

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The only letter I want to receive from you regarding football, is not one of excuses, but one that states that mediocrity is not acceptable at any time at any level and that you are taking steps to remedy the situation.

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Again, unnecessary comma in the first clause.

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As I stated before, you were hired to manage the department, you may or may not retire here.

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You did not, in fact, that state that before.

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LSU is my university and you are it's employee.

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You are it is employee? Really? I think you meant "its" without the apostrophe.

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If LSU does not show drastic improvement in 2010.

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Not a complete sentence; makes no sense as a sentence.

If you are going to send a letter to show off, you should at least try to use proper grammar.