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Posted on 5/17/24 at 11:16 am to
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Posted on 5/17/24 at 11:16 am to
### Title: **Orange is the New Green**

### Genre: Sports Comedy

### Logline:
The world's top golfer finds himself behind bars after a bizarre arrest for not heeding a police officer’s instructions while parking for a PGA Major. To earn his freedom, he must transform a group of misfit inmates into champions for the Wardens Cup, an underground prison golf tournament.

### Act 1

**Opening Scene:**
A pristine golf course at dawn. RICK "THE DRIVER" DAVIS (30s), the number one golfer in the world, is practicing his swings. Confident and slightly cocky, he’s preparing for the biggest tournament of his career.

**Inciting Incident:**
Running late for his tee time, Rick speeds into the tournament parking lot, ignoring a police officer’s instructions to stop and causing a minor commotion. He’s arrested for disorderly conduct and obstructing a police officer.

**Conflict:**
Rick's high-profile arrest causes a media frenzy. The judge, known for his tough stance on celebrities, sentences Rick to 30 days in Sequoia State Prison to teach him a lesson about respecting authority.

### Act 2

**Setting:**
Sequoia State Prison is a maximum-security facility with a grim reputation. Rick, still in his designer golf attire, stands out like a sore thumb among the inmates.

**New Challenge:**
Warden FRANKLIN "FRANK" GRIMES (50s), a no-nonsense but golf-obsessed leader, strikes a deal with Rick. If Rick can lead the prison’s ragtag golf team to victory in the clandestine Wardens Cup, he’ll be released early.

**Introducing the Team:**
Rick meets his team:
- TINY (40s), a massive but gentle giant who’s surprisingly good at putting.
- SLICK (30s), a con artist with a knack for trick shots.
- BULL (20s), a hot-headed former street racer with incredible swing speed.
- DOC (60s), a wise old-timer who’s been in prison for decades and knows the course like the back of his hand.

**Training Montage:**
Rick starts training the inmates, but it’s a chaotic mess. They struggle with the basics, and Rick faces constant resistance and sabotage from RIVAL GANG LEADER, "BONES" (30s), who hates Rick's guts.

**Breakthrough:**
After a series of comedic failures, Rick finds a way to connect with each inmate, using their unique skills and personalities to improve their game. They start to bond and show real progress.

### Act 3

**The Wardens Cup:**
The secret tournament is held at a hidden, luxurious prison golf course. Competing against other prison teams, including Bones’ team, Rick’s crew faces fierce competition and dirty tricks.

**Climax:**
In a nail-biting final match, Rick and his team are neck and neck with Bones' team. Rick must play the game of his life, balancing strategy, skill, and the support of his team to win.

**Resolution:**
Rick’s team wins the Wardens Cup in an epic finish. The warden keeps his promise, and Rick is released early. The inmates, now local heroes, gain newfound respect and hope for their futures.

**Closing Scene:**
Rick is back on the professional golf circuit, humbled and wiser from his experience. He dedicates his next tournament to his “team” back at Sequoia State Prison, promising to visit and continue supporting them.

### Epilogue:
A comedic montage of the inmates continuing to practice and improve their golf skills, dreaming of a future beyond prison walls, hinting at potential for a sequel or further adventures.
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