re: Man loses his hard earned money at the casino and loses it

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Someone told me a story about someone who has been dead for awhile, but the guy was known to drink and gamble and there were some good stories about him

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I never knew that it takes actual talent for someone to tell a good story until I read this horrible intro. It's all over the place; in one sentence.

Organize your thoughts after the rough draft rolls through your head. The wheels turning your brain need balancing weights. No wonder why the 0T pushes you around. Take it step by step. If you plan a little, your story may grow legs and stand on it's own.

Seriously though, your stories truly suck.