LSU Pitcher Blair Frederick Is Transferring

I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Point them out if you will.

There is in fact one missing comma separating 2 independent clauses with a coordinate conjunction. Other than that, his sentence structure, while not the best, is grammatically correct. That's the fun part about English grammer; at a certain point, it becomes what's proper as opposed to what's correct.

The guy who broke Gregs face