re: A real Brian Kelly assessment

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Historically, previous predecessors of LSU coaches had records that were flawed also. Ed O had 3 wins prior to his arrival at LSU vs ranked opponents. By 2021, AT LSU, he was in the top 3 coaching rankings vs ranked opponents. Evidenced based practice showed that even despite Ed’s weaknesses he could still beat top teams solely based off talent alone. When evaluating Brian Kelly you get to equivocate a proven winner who used the lines of scrimmage to mask obvious talent deficiencies and consistently win football games.

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Great post! Now, let’s get to work so it’s ready for publishing.

1. Get rid of “previous”. All predecessors are previous.
2. Get rid of “even” in “even despite”; it’s redundant.
3. What were you going for with “equivocate”? Find another word for whatever you meant.

I meant what I wrote above, though. Your post is spot on.