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re: GoT = Deus ex Machina Factory

Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:03 am to
Posted by theunknownknight
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:03 am to
Well they did earlier in the show. One turned in Castle Black.

Jon even says himself AFTER saying wights die if the Walker that raised them is killed: the drunk killed by the wight bear and the cold would turn if they didn't burn the body.

They are clearly using a form of vampire logic. If you are bitten/killed by the infected you will rise to join to the line of the walker that raised the one that killed you.

This was CLEARLY established in Castle Black and by what Jon ACTUALLY SAYS.

So...why didn't he just take the first guy killed by the wight bear right outside the wall back to Dany?
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:06 am
Posted by ohiovol
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:09 am to
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Well they did earlier in the show. One turned in Castle Black.



They had already been touched by the White Walkers.

Edit: I was wrong about their eyes being blue in the television series, but they hadn't been rotting despite the fact they were dead for days. Something was definitely up, and Sam said something about dead being reanimated by White Walkers 'touch' later in the episode.

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They are clearly using a form of vampire logic. If you are bitten/killed by the infected you will rise to join to the line of the walker that raised the one that killed you.


I'm 90% sure that's wrong.
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So...why didn't he just take the first guy killed by the wight bear right outside the wall back to Dany?


Because they would have been bringing back a rotting corpse.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:23 am
Posted by ZappBrannigan
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:17 am to
Benjens whole thing in the north was getting Bran around. Show dropped the ball since book Coldhands was there whole time for Sam and Bran. That was bad writing but qualifies because the show fricked up the source material.

Stannis we saw receive the message for aid and he answered the call.

Drogon came in by himself and let loose. He loves his mama and was allowed to free roam. Which we knew.
Posted by Dr RC
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:17 am to
Jon is the chosen one. The Old Gods and the New are at his side brah. DWI.
Posted by theunknownknight
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:19 am to
I don't recall the corpse in Castle Black being touched or raised by a Walker. That was never shown. What was shown previously was several thousand men being raised without being touched by a White Walker.

Further, if the vampire approach is wrong and they would have been trotting back a corpse, how was the drunk going to rise again? Why burn the body?

The bottom line: Jon CLEARLY and firmly believed his dead companion would rise because he was killed by a wight - so why didn't he believe the same exact thing moments before when another companion was attacked and killed by THE SAME EXACT WIGHT? A character's actions should be based on what THEY believe in the story, not based on convoluted plot details the writers failed to convey. Based on Jon's belief, they take the first corpse and return.

This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:22 am
Posted by ohiovol
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:25 am to
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I don't recall the corpse in Castle Black being touched or raised by a Walker. That was never shown. What was shown previously was several thousand men being raised without being touched by a White Walker.



Hardhome? It was clear they were raised when the Night King raised his hands. I wasn't implying he would go touch all of them one at a time. Just that taking a corpse south isn't automatically going to result in it becoming a wight.

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Further, if the vampire approach is wrong and they would have been trotting back a corpse, how was the drunk going to rise again? Why burn the body?



There were White Walkers in the area. If one of them is close enough and raises his hands, Thoros would get up and try to kill them.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:26 am
Posted by ZappBrannigan
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:30 am to
They were the very first part of the show was with a WW, which were kinda orcs before they got a better budget and it's band of wights take out a patrol.

It was a trap to get them in and draw out the Nights Watch which it did.

Mormont's great ranging.

The wights themselves are able to think but it's simple think. We've seen them problem solve and take initiative on their own.

Jon clearly thought Thoros would rise since they were beyond the wall in the presence of WW. One who brought back the dead at hardhome all at once.

This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:32 am
Posted by TigerinATL
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:46 am to
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And his magic uncle saving Bran and Jon out of no where TWICE?


I said it in one of the show threads, when there are multiple entities on boths sides with the ability to see the future it's hard to claim Deus Ex Machina. We know for a fact that Bran and the Hound saw parts of this encounter before it happened. Uncle Benjen was created by someone who had access to the old TER who would have foreseen this as well. Now there are certainly slippery slope questions when leaning on seeing the future like why did you stop A and not B, but Uncle Benjen being in the right place at the right time fits the rules they've laid out. Jon Snow being tackled into freezing water by 2 wights and getting out was a harder to believe survival than Uncle Benjen IMO. Do the wights really just become useless in water?
Posted by TigerinATL
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 10:55 am to
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The bottom line: Jon CLEARLY and firmly believed his dead companion would rise because he was killed by a wight - so why didn't he believe the same exact thing moments before when another companion was attacked and killed by THE SAME EXACT WIGHT? A character's actions should be based on what THEY believe in the story, not based on convoluted plot details the writers failed to convey. Based on Jon's belief, they take the first corpse and return.


This was never about getting a Wight, it was about a Dirty Dozen excursion. They set it up poorly and executed it poorly. But it still gave most of us what we wanted in the end. It's too bad so many people are too neurotic to have enjoyed it.

I'm starting to think that these books attracted people with OCD and now that everything isn't as tightly ordered as before some of you are starting to lose it. Fan service is a new phrase I've heard as much as Deus Ex Machina the last few weeks. I get that the show isn't doing the exact same thing it was doing at the beginning, but why is giving the fans what they want some majorly negative thing?

And from the sounds of it the real problem isn't GRRM or D&D, it's HBO not being willing to pay for as many episodes as they need to tell this story. Hardly anybody rips on HBO, it's all the fault of D&D. I don't understand how adding 7 more episodes wouldn't have been worth it for HBO.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 10:57 am
Posted by Sneaky__Sally
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 11:02 am to
I think people are getting wrapped up in the Deus ex Machina label. All that matters is does it make for good and compelling storytelling? For me, jon being dumb and getting saved all the time isn't compelling - regardless of if it is reasonable or not.

- not to mention, what kind of a-hole willingly chooses to go take the black at the beginning of the series like that.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 11:04 am
Posted by TigerinATL
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 11:24 am to
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For me, jon being dumb and getting saved all the time isn't compelling - regardless of if it is reasonable or not.


The problem is I think Dany waiting on the wall longingly for Jon was one of the outline bullet points they had to hit. How do you hit that without Jon both being in mortal danger and separated from the group? I do think him getting tackled was one threat too many, but if they all fly back on Drogon you lose a little something in the nephew aunt romance.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 11:25 am
Posted by Sneaky__Sally
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 11:58 am to
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The problem is I think Dany waiting on the wall longingly for Jon was one of the outline bullet points they had to hit. How do you hit that without Jon both being in mortal danger and separated from the group? I do think him getting tackled was one threat too many, but if they all fly back on Drogon you lose a little something in the nephew aunt romance.



For me, that isn't a good enough reason- other people i am sure feel differently. Its still a good show and story, but when I become invested I start paying more attention and digging deeper and some parts of the show don't hold up under that scrutiny. Which is fine - the show and series just don't quite hold up to the promise of their early seasons for me.
Posted by Josh Fenderman
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 12:32 pm to
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People just seem to be trying to pick apart the show at this point

To be fair, there's a lot to pick apart from the last couple episodes alone.
Posted by rondo
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 12:43 pm to
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Does this bother anyone else?



no because I'm not an idiot
Posted by Methuselah
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 1:00 pm to
I think it's a mistake to argue whether one rescue or another meets the definition of Dues ex Machina. Sure that is a cool sounding term and it has a great history. But it's not the be-all and end-all of the extent individuals enjoy their fiction.

I think the better question is whether the show is starting to rely too much on putting it's characters into seemingly impossible situations to try and build tension and then rely on some sort of unlikely or even miraculous event to save them.

Jon fell into an icy lake surrounded by wights who were out to kill him. I'd bet this was meant to look like a seemingly hopeless situation. Yet, I'd also bet that almost nobody thought that he would die or be sidelined for long.

Pretty much the same thing with Jamie sinking to the bottom of what looked like a deep lake and weighted down with armor where his enemies were all over the place. I doubt very many people really worried that he would die. The only real question was whether he would be captured or get away.

It hasn't killed my enjoyment of the show - I still love it. But I do think this season mostly hasn't been the top notch storytelling that the show has demonstrated at times.
Posted by shel311
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 1:11 pm to
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How many times is this plot device used in this story? Jon has been miraculously saved at the last minute 3 times alone.

Does this bother anyone else?
Is this really different from most shows with action/drama?

Right off the top of my head, I just finished a rewatch of Breaking Bad...Walt almost died about 437 times.
Posted by Speedy G
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 1:23 pm to
Yes, the show has resorted to the very near deaths of major characters to create faux drama. Jamie's and then Jon's apparent drownings are the most obvious recent examples. We also had Jon being pulled from the pile of bodies during the battle of the bastards, and Tormund pulled from the lake beyond the wall. You could even add The Hound's return from apparent death and Jorah being the first adult ever cured of grayscale. I would not include Jon's resurrection, as that was thoroughly set up.

GOT really made a name for itself with its willingness to kill off (or maim) major characters, and replacing it with the more common and far less impactful near death tease is an unfortunate step backward and not at all necessary. Still love the show but starting to feel a little cheated.
Posted by 19
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 1:25 pm to
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Deus ex machina


...second only to 'cuck' in the term most misused and misunderstood on this board.

And I think you have TWD and GoT mixed up. I've never had the impression that wights have any infectious properties in any way.

I think the idea that "only those killed by a WW can be raised" is based on us witnessing them raising a lot of fresh kills (ep 1, Hardhome). But this raising is not due to cause of death, IMO, but rather because these bodies are the preferred vessels: not yet rotting and can absorb more damage than old corpses and skeletons. Of course, the WW will raise resort to them when needed, as we have seen (Hold the Door).

The "rules" as I see them: any dead body, physically intact enough to be raised and in the vicinity of/seen/sensed by a WW, can and will be raised based on the discretion of said WW - It's a voluntary process, not automatic. I have no idea how the distance from target affects initial raising, other than it must to be North of The Wall. Since dragons seem to require the touch of the NK, it must require vast amounts of power/ magic to raise them....similar to what is required to create WWs out of live humans (Craster's bastards)
Posted by studentsect
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 1:47 pm to
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The bottom line: Jon CLEARLY and firmly believed his dead companion would rise because he was killed by a wight - so why didn't he believe the same exact thing moments before when another companion was attacked and killed by THE SAME EXACT WIGHT? A character's actions should be based on what THEY believe in the story, not based on convoluted plot details the writers failed to convey. Based on Jon's belief, they take the first corpse and return.


Being scared that a corpse could become a zombie and believing that a corpse is a zombie are two completely different things.

Bringing back a dead body that is not currently zombified, even if you believe it could become a zombie, and then showing a dead body not yet displaying zombie characteristics to doubters as evidence of zombies, is an even worse plan than the actual zombie capture plan.
This post was edited on 8/24/17 at 1:48 pm
Posted by molsusports
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Posted on 8/24/17 at 3:11 pm to
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How many times is this plot device used in this story? Jon has been miraculously saved at the last minute 3 times alone.

Does this bother anyone else?



Not quite as much as the apologists for it annoy me. We all like the show well enough to still watch (it isn't Dexter).

And who didn't know the term since they were in middle school? Has this kind of basic term been cut out of our medial education systems? I don't think it has been. I think people just have a knee jerk predisposition to attack an opinion they don't like by attacking something about the person expressing the opinion (rather than dispute whether something qualifies by definition you attack the person by asserting they don't even understand the definition).

IMO the criticism is legitimate for at least some examples. Stannis rescuing Jon probably qualifies not because he arrived to defend the North from wildlings, but because of the timing of that rescue. Benjen's rescue was poorly done and unnecessary at a minimum... unless there is a reveal that the NK decided to let that happen (because of some crazy Bran is NK reveal later on that gives credence to a bond between the NK and Jon). The moving around of characters in the last show (at least) was forced and unconvincing. I thought the "go capture a wight" plot was also idiotic for reasons that have already been dwelled upon at length. I think those flaws have also played a role with the annoyance many felt with the Benjen rescue on top of all of the other twists that pulled the viewer out of their enjoyment of the show.

Anyway, I can give a pass for the battle of the bastards because it does seem plausible for tactical reasons to wait until the last minute to flank and overrun Bolton forces. IMO the resurrection of Jon clearly does not qualify because we had seen characters be resurrected before and Jon is the metaphor for Ice and Fire, a person of importance enough to be worth bringing back.
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