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re: 'Twas The Night Before Kickoff

Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:35 pm to
Posted by Thib-a-doe Tiger
Member since Nov 2012
35379 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:35 pm to
LET'S frickING DO THIS!!!!!!!





AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!











































Posted by BayouBengals327
Baton Rouge
Member since Nov 2011
353 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:36 pm to
Posted by BallHawk
Orlando
Member since Jul 2011
5736 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:37 pm to
In all seriousness publish that as a children's book. That's amazing! GEAUX TIGERS!
Posted by MikeIs4LSU
Lafayette
Member since Feb 2007
218 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:50 pm to
Thanks, trying to figure out who to send it to and do that now BallHawk.
Posted by betheone
BR
Member since Feb 2014
412 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:52 pm to
Excellent!!!
Posted by StickyFingaz
Austin
Member since May 2013
13483 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 2:53 pm to


Posted by LuckySo-n-So
Member since Jul 2005
22079 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 3:23 pm to
Pretty good effort.

I hate to be Johnny Raincloud, BUT...

One of my biggest pet peeves when rewriting well-established poems is "forced meter". The words need to fall right into place without having to backtrack so you can fit them in. Unfortunately, there are quite a few places with forced meter.

Otherwise, this is a nice job! B-

Geaux Tigers
Posted by Tiger F@g
Houston, TX.
Member since Sep 2003
1387 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 3:34 pm to
:jump2: :jump1:
Posted by gwilging
Virginia Beach, VA
Member since Mar 2011
1396 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 3:37 pm to
Somebody, please publish this. This man's writing is not suspect.
Posted by WTIGER
Baton Rouge
Member since Dec 2011
991 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 3:56 pm to
Posted by Dubaitiger
Abu Dhabi, UAE
Member since Nov 2005
4941 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 4:08 pm to
Great work Mike

Miles Clapping :lol:
Posted by PDgirl
Greenville, SC
Member since Aug 2011
1058 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 4:11 pm to
Posted by VernonPLSUfan
Leesville, La.
Member since Sep 2007
15846 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 4:16 pm to
Mike you have poet skills,
And that I say for real.
On a week to remember,
You eloquently rendered,
A sonnet to toast forever.
Posted by SCwTiger
armpit of 'merica
Member since Aug 2014
5857 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 4:45 pm to
ohellyeah

Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
124224 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 5:23 pm to
Reminds me a bit of Saban and The Hat from years back.


Good show friend.

Bully!

Posted by lsubuddy
houma, la
Member since Jul 2014
4300 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 6:25 pm to
ABSOLUTELY FRIGGIN AWESOME !YOU ARE TALENTED BRO.I can't stop reading it. I'm seeing it being read by Samuel l Jackson , Kiefer Southerland ,etc with video highlights
Posted by gar90
Member since Sep 2009
6037 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 7:04 pm to
This post made me erect.

Edit: the OP
This post was edited on 8/29/14 at 7:05 pm
Posted by GeauxLSU8
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2005
4234 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 7:16 pm to
Posted by BayouBandit24
Member since Aug 2010
16575 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 7:58 pm to
Posted by abellsujr
New England
Member since Apr 2014
35270 posts
Posted on 8/29/14 at 8:02 pm to
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