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re: Letter From B.R. Attorney Re: Lack of National Media Coverage Goes Viral

Posted on 8/21/16 at 8:01 am to
Posted by Breesus
House of the Rising Sun
Member since Jan 2010
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Posted on 8/21/16 at 8:01 am to
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I suppose a bunch of self-sufficient folks that actually love one another, and are trying to figure things out isn't as interesting to you as casting gross stereotypes over people who live fly-over country


You should always proof read your work; and your first sentence should be attention grabbing, grammatically correct, and a hook for the reader. He was missing all of those elements.

That letter reads like the ramblings of a whiny bitch. There are much more efficient ways to get your point across.

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Al Sharpton, Donald Trump, Hillary Clinton, President Obama, Kim Kardasian, and others - are nowhere to be found.


That's his second dig at Donald Trump, who was the first and only person to come down here, and donated and banded out supplies himself.
This post was edited on 8/21/16 at 8:06 am
Posted by ILikeLSUToo
Central, LA
Member since Jan 2008
18018 posts
Posted on 8/21/16 at 8:17 am to
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You should always proof read your work; and your first sentence should be attention grabbing, grammatically correct, and a hook for the reader. He was missing all of those elements.

That letter reads like the ramblings of a whiny bitch. There are much more efficient ways to get your point across.



Yeah, I thought attorneys were supposed to be competent writers. This thing needs an editor in the worst way.
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