New rap for this hot summer...

that beat is fricking terrible and you aren't nearly as funny as krispy kreme

the beat is not very good.

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fricking terrible

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probably better describes it, but i'm trying to give you constructive criticism. i didn't even listen to it because the beat was making my ears bleed, and not in a good way

Do you actually think that this is good music?? Sorry to burst your bubble, but if you produced this, just quit and find a different job! Absolutely terrible!

I'm gonna be painfully honest here brah.


That shite was absoloutely horrible. And when I say horrible, I mean burning dog shite horrible. From the beat to the lyrics to the hook. The entire song.

That is horrible. You think that sounds good? And something people will listen to?

Do you have anything else? You might wanna rework that beat. It sounds like you found the most annoying sounds on your keyboard or whatever and built the beat around that.

As far as the rapping, you told us you're a grad student, so when you're rapping about duck tapping money to a ceiling fan, it sounds really dumb. Rap about something that's actually applicable to you. Otherwise no one will give you a second listen. Be creative. Rap about a bad bowel movement or a shite professor, something besides hustling, which I'm 99% sure you're not doing.

producing skills= not good. beat is wack.

rapper= your 27 better quit... move on

I was trying to give you actual feedback instead of just telling you that it was terrible. Is this the only thing you have?

I'm speechless.

Take it how you want.