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re: So how long once London has a team they move or become defunct

Posted on 7/18/14 at 11:06 am to
Posted by mizzoukills
Member since Aug 2011
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Posted on 7/18/14 at 11:06 am to
fightingtigers98

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oh im sorry is this better for you?



No need to get pissy when someone calls you out for being grammatically retarded. I was trying to help you, brother!

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"So how long after London is granted a team, will that team move or become a defunct organization?"



No need for a comma. It doesn't work well in your sentence.

How about this:

Once London has an NFL team, how long before that team moves or is defunct?

or..

How long before a London NFL team moves or is defunct?

or...

How quickly will a new London NFL team move or be defunct?


That's more concise. You should update your thread title now.
This post was edited on 7/18/14 at 11:14 am
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