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Kristen Stewart is a Poet Now

Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:35 pm
Posted by TygerTyger
Houston
Member since Oct 2010
9177 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:35 pm
After reading this I feel like I've taken crazy pills:


quote:

My Heart Is A Wiffle Ball/Freedom Pole

I reared digital moonlight
You read its clock, scrawled neon across that black
Kismetly … ubiquitously crest fallen
Thrown down to strafe your foothills
…I’ll suck the bones pretty.
Your nature perforated the abrasive organ pumps
Spray painted everything known to man,
Stream rushed through and all out into
Something Whilst the crackling stare down sun snuck
Through our windows boarded up
He hit your flint face and it sparked.

And I bellowed and you parked
We reached Marfa.
One honest day up on this freedom pole
Devils not done digging
He’s speaking in tongues all along the pan handle
And this pining erosion is getting dust in
My eyes
And I’m drunk on your morsels
And so I look down the line
Your every twitch hand drum salute
Salutes mine …



Is this an acid trip written down? Is she serious?
Posted by Henry Jones Jr
Member since Jun 2011
68438 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:38 pm to
And I'm Luke Skywalker.
Posted by Scruffy
Kansas City
Member since Jul 2011
72016 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:48 pm to
So, shitty actress and shitty poet? Who knew?
Posted by Thunder Tiger
Member since Sep 2011
2608 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:52 pm to
Posted by wildtigercat93
Member since Jul 2011
112206 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 5:53 pm to
She forgot to write down all the "ums" and nervous smiles as she looks away
Posted by TygerTyger
Houston
Member since Oct 2010
9177 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 7:08 pm to
quote:

She forgot to write down all the "ums" and nervous smiles as she looks away


Don't forget the lip lick/bite move...

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Posted by Backinthe615
Member since Nov 2011
6871 posts
Posted on 2/19/14 at 7:38 pm to
I know d#ck all about evaluating poetry, but if "heart wiffle ball" and "freedom pole" were both vital enough to / them in the title it's probably gonna be a meandering pos.

But IWHI and lie like a wiffle bat about how that poem moved my soul to do it.
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