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re: My cousin Randall wrote an essay for his Leadership class about Baskin Robbins

Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:06 pm to
Posted by lsulaker
BR
Member since Jan 2009
1359 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:06 pm to
That is very poorly written. "It's" should never be abbreviated, no should any abbreviations be used in a paper. There are run on sentences and choppy sentences. These things should have been learned in 8th grade. Please edit it for him and make it sound more professional. It often sounds like he is writing as he would talk.
Posted by LucasP
Member since Apr 2012
21618 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:06 pm to
quote:

 I’ve got the drive inside of me. And that word “drive” has double meaning. I have the drive, to drive. 


Excellent word play.
Posted by ronk
Member since Jan 2015
6159 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:06 pm to
Make sure what you say is correct before correcting someone else!!
Posted by accnodefense
Trump Fan
Member since Dec 2010
6279 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:07 pm to
quote:

That is very poorly written. "It's" should never be abbreviated, no should any abbreviations be used in a paper. There are run on sentences and choppy sentences. These things should have been learned in 8th grade. Please edit it for him and make it sound more professional. It often sounds like he is writing as he would talk.


Pretty sure this is a rough draft. I will relay that onto Randall
Posted by aVatiger
Water
Member since Jan 2006
27967 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:07 pm to
Ride for Randall
Posted by LSUmajek
Kemah
Member since Dec 2013
546 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:10 pm to
Heck yes Randall
Posted by elprez00
Hammond, LA
Member since Sep 2011
29354 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:10 pm to
This would make an awesome Key and Peele skit.
Posted by Walking the Earth
Member since Feb 2013
17260 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:11 pm to
Randall is making Baskin-Robbins look good. They really should have a day where 5% of their proceeds go to hooking him up with some wheels.

They can even deck it out in their colors and logo. Randall would be honored to drive it around town.
Posted by accnodefense
Trump Fan
Member since Dec 2010
6279 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:11 pm to
The more I think about it the more I think Sweet Tart is a pimp and Trini is one of his ho's
Posted by HammerheadLincoln
The farther west the farther out
Member since May 2015
4868 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:13 pm to
Still have no idea what these Randall threads are about
Posted by chryso
Baton Rouge
Member since Jul 2008
11849 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:15 pm to
So you will write Randall's name all the time but you blank out your own first name.
Posted by Walking the Earth
Member since Feb 2013
17260 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:16 pm to
This is going Breaking Bad, I can feel it.

But I'm shite at predicting plot twists so don't be too quick to take my word for it.
Posted by The Sad Banana
The gate is narrow.
Member since Jul 2008
89498 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:16 pm to
Sounds like Char'Kethia needs to lose some relatives in a drive by in order to gain some initiative.

I'm proud of Randall. I feel like I know him.
Posted by Wtodd
Tampa, FL
Member since Oct 2013
67478 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:17 pm to
quote:

After a day of deliberation, I accepted the position at Baskin Robbins.

BR doesn't have positions; they have jobs.
Posted by Walking the Earth
Member since Feb 2013
17260 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:18 pm to
It's that kind of attitude that will get you working at one of Randall's franchises 10 years from now.
Posted by captainahab
Highway Trio8
Member since Dec 2014
1598 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:20 pm to
I wish the world was full of Randall's - it would be a much better place!
Posted by Boudreaux35
BR
Member since Sep 2007
21397 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:25 pm to
Randall needs a woman. Just wait until he gets his first taste and see how much initiative he has for work!

quote:

All I know is this – when I am sitting behind the wheel of my own ride, wheels spinning, foot on the pedal, music blasting, windows down and wind blowing through my hair, and the road infront of me, I will smile and remember it all started with the first step – showing an initiative to make it a reality.


Only on Sundays....
Posted by SirWinston
PNW
Member since Jul 2014
81144 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:26 pm to
Mate these posts rock
Posted by tigerstripedjacket
This side of the wall
Member since Sep 2011
2992 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:26 pm to
Typo - should say Oct 20th

Posted by Count Chocula
Tier 5 and proud
Member since Feb 2009
63908 posts
Posted on 10/13/15 at 1:31 pm to
quote:

accnodefense


I aint reading all this. Just send me a pm when Randall and Char'Kethia hook up....
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