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re: Just finished Fourth Wing / Book 1 of Empyrean Series

Posted on 1/2/24 at 9:26 am to
Posted by Bert Macklin FBI
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Posted on 1/2/24 at 9:26 am to
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It aggravates the hell out of me that the author is constantly destabilizing Xaden and Violots relationship so that they can have make up sex or some shite.


Yeah part 2 of Iron flame became a YA novel that was dumb af. Also I HATED that Xaden just turned Venin at the end. Yaros spent 1000 pages telling us how these Venin were power hungry freaks that just want to destroy the world and then ruins it by making it take 2 seconds to become one but somehow you can never go back? It just made no sense. If he was gonna burn out from channeling Dragon energy, then why was he able to channel Venin energy without issue? It was such a BS move that makes me question whether I want to keep reading. Either Violets pussy is the antidote to being a Venin or Xaden has to turn full heel and become evil and the remainder of the series needs to be Xaden vs Violet.

I'm probably gonna give it at least one more book to see if she can remedy this shite hole she put this story in or I'm gonna bail.

I HATE when authors or show runner stake a great concept and ruin it by doing too much. Dragons and Gryphons vs Venin was a great concept. Turning the main character was some twighlight BS that we didn't need.
This post was edited on 1/2/24 at 9:28 am
Posted by 225rumpshaker
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Member since Sep 2006
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Posted on 1/18/24 at 5:24 am to
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I HATE when authors or show runner stake a great concept and ruin it by doing too much. Dragons and Gryphons vs Venin was a great concept. Turning the main character was some twighlight BS that we didn't need.
When you realize it is really a YA romance novel with fantasy elements sprinkled in then it completely lines up. She needed some more conflict to drive between Violet and Xaden in order to have the forbidden sex scenes continue.
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